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Once experienced I going to the beach, it became my favorite.
I had a date with my friend; he told me there is a beautiful beach near National Sun Yat-sen University.
That beach which he told me about was a place I never knew. I was shocked because I was born in Kaohsiung and have lived here for 20 years. I should know about Kaohsiung than my friend. By the way, he comes from UK.
That beach which he told me about was a place I never knew. I was shocked because I was born in Kaohsiung and have lived here for 20 years. I should know about Kaohsiung than my friend. By the way, he comes from UK.
When we got there, I was shocked again. It is too beautiful to beyond description. I was excited and could not wait to run into the sea. So I put everything down and run into the sea. Meanwhile, I got an idea to stay along the sea and took a photo. My friend took the picture for me. I thought the photo would not be pretty. So I looked at the photo which and I was wrong. It was a great shot.
Every time I am free, I will go there to watch the
beautiful sea and sunset. It can help me feel more relax.
This beautiful place is worth to visit.
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once [Once I] experience[d] went [going] there [where?], this [which one?] beach became my favorite.
I had [a] date with my friend [;] , he told me there [where?] is a beautiful near here [where?]. That beach which he told [me] about [was a place I never knew about] I never knew. I was shock[ed] because I was born in Kaohsiung and have lived here for 20 years. I should know about Kaohsiung than my friend. By the way, he come[s] from UK.
When we got there, I was shock[ed] again. It is too beautiful to say anything [beyond description]. I was excite[d] and could not wait to run into the sea. So I putted [put] everything down and run into the sea. Meanwhile, I got a[an] idea which was I stayed [to stay] in the middle [?] of the sea and took a photo. My friend took the picture for me. I thought the photo would not be pretty. So I looked at the photo which I believed [and] I was wrong. It is [was] so great [shot] as I wanted.
Every time I am free, I will go there to watch the
beautiful sea and sunset. It can help me feel more relax.
This beautiful place is worth to stay [?/visiting?].